Reflection of Descriptive Paper

First I started off just brainstorming ideas that would be easy and specific to write about. I spun a web in the studio and ran with my ideas, building off memories. It took me about a week to work on my descriptive paper. I must of wrote it six times before I got it right. Some pieces I’ve added and the not so important parts I’ve removed. As I remember more details of my son birth, the more my story will come alive and let my readers feel as if they were actually were in that hospital room with me. I choose this topic because it was personal but a positive effect in which I’m trying to capture the attention of my readers. It was an experience of a life time and not everyone has children, so I thought it would be great to share my experience. So hopefully my readers are going to capture the moment and get caught up in it, just as I did witnessing the birth of my son.
My draft even went well. I learned from Lionel and I learned from myself after I read out loud. So upon completion of my paper, I’ll be adding more sensory details to make it more interesting without changing the subject. Overall it’ll be a powerful description to all who reads it because it demands the attention of all types of readers and learners, besides that it’s interesting and it makes your mind soar.